Monday, May 7, 2012

Collin

15 comments:

  1. Good job! I really liked the way you put the stories in your speech. You spoke very well.

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  2. Collin, I loved hearing how you and Nick grew up together. It was cool to hear and see how you worked so hard to get to Colorado School of Mines! Congrats!

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  3. I felt like we were having a conversation, you seemed very relaxed and knew what you wanted to say.

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  4. I really liked all of your pictures! It fit well with what you were talking about! Congratulations on getting into Mines! I hope you do well!!

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  5. I like the personal stories. I enjoy the personal pictures as well. I like that you describe each person in your life and how they influenced you to do better in specific times in your life. Good job!

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  6. Great job making it very personable. The stories you added made your presentation very easy to stay focused on because it didn't sound like you were just reading word for word.

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  7. I really liked how you didnt read directly from your paper when you talked about Nick. You actually talked to the audience and that was really great and inviting. You couldn't help but listen.

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  8. The funny story at the beginnning was a nice touch. I also liked his metaphor for his life being like a building. It was very smooth and audiable. Nice work.

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  9. Good job, I liked the stories you told!

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  10. Great Lecture, the story about you and your friend was a good way to pull the audience into your lecture. Good luck in your future.

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  11. You seem very accomplished with your schooling and I hope you do well at Mines. Your stories were engaging and funny. Good job.

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  12. Very well done speech Collin! I am happy too see that you are attending mines next year. I hope to see you there!

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  13. Great job Collin, I loved hearing about how you and Nick grew up together! Congrats on getting into Colorado School of Mines!

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  14. Very nice work!!! It was very entertaining and I loved the stories!

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  15. Collin, You had great eye contact and the story you told was funny. It was a great addition. Good Job!

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